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Wednesday, August 24

To the Girl on the Right

Was it you who told me to stop clicking
when I got hold of my camera?
Or was it I who stopped clicking
‘cause I was awestruck by your beauty, by your smile, by your aura?

You were beautiful, I was awkward
Yet your smile made it okay
I took a photograph of you and your siblings
And I still keep it to this day

That was that last I've seen you,
When off you went to chase your dreams
We never got to catch up
You've a different life, as it seems

All these years I tried finding you,
Your whereabouts, I never got to trace
But wherever I’d go, I bring this photograph, this memory of you...
Just in case.

~my entry to Magpie Tales


kenchu said...

wow! galing! :-)

Nate said...

@kenchu: oh, hey there.. that was fast.. thank you for visiting and leaving a comment! i appreciate it! :)

Ms. Chuniverse said...

Oh, that was me!

Nandito lang kaya ako.



Isa ka talagang literary chu chu.

Nice. :)

Nate said...

@hrh queen chuni: oh, it was you? porket may beauty, smile, at aura.. ikaw na agad?! wahahaha! :P

madam, nahulog ako sa chair ko.. lol at "literary chu chu"... ahahaha! :P

the green breaker said...

ay. ang galing mo talaga kuya. :)

Nate said...

@joe: thanks baby bro! yan ang gusto ko sa 'yo.. may instant akong kakampi.. :)

Helen said...

Love the story you created from the photo!

Nate said...

@helen: thank you! :)

Tess Kincaid said...

Bittersweet loveliness...

Nate said...

@tess: indeed! :)

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